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    Home » How could a killer with soulless, nightmare eyes ever care for a child? #Excerpt from A Stolen Heart #SpaceOpera #MFRWauthor

How could a killer with soulless, nightmare eyes ever care for a child? #Excerpt from A Stolen Heart #SpaceOpera #MFRWauthor

Kayelle Allen 01/15/2020 MM Romance 12 Comments

How could a killer with soulless, nightmare eyes ever care for a child? #Excerpt from A Stolen Heart #SpaceOpera #MFRWauthor

Nightmare Eyes: a scene from A Stolen Heart

(this book is coming soon)

Luc has rescued a half-human three-year-old boy and to protect him, is taking him home as part of a foster program. Having worked with human teenagers for decades, he's comfortable with young people, but  children baffle him. And because his real eyes--his nightmare eyes--are terrifying to humans, he never reveals them to anyone.

While they are in Luc's hoversine, he realizes this child has better vision than most, because he's commented on something far in the distance.


"I can't believe you can see that far."

"I see better than humans." Senthys folded his hands. "Can you see that far?"

"You mean because I have 'weird' eyes?" Nightmare eyes, more like it.

"Uh huh."

"I have better vision than most people." How odd to have a discussion with a child. Usually, none stayed in his presence long enough to say hello.

"Do they hurt?"

"My eyes?" His real eyes would send the boy screaming in the other direction, but it was sweet of him to show concern. "They don't hurt. I cover them for protection."

The boy squinted. "Do my eyes need 'tection?"

"Pro-tection." He patted the boy's hand. "Yours are fine. Mine are sensitive to light." It was an old lie but kept people from asking him to show them his real eyes. He fished out dark glasses he wore in the event of a lens failure, and put them on. "I wear these if I'm in the sun all day."

"Can I try?"

Luc considered it. "Why not?" He pulled them off and helped the boy adjust them over his ears and nose.

The wraparound glasses dwarfed the young face. When they slid down his nose, the child tilted back his head and pushed them up.

"Don't move." After pulling out his mobile, Luc captured an image. Without proof, his friends would never believe he'd been this close to a child without it fleeing in terror.

"Do us!" Senthys patted the seat beside him. "Take our picture."

Luc set his device to hover an arm's length away, then put his head closer to the boy's. "Portrait. Capture." The mobile made a soft click signaling completion.

When he showed the image to the boy, Senthys squealed. "That's me! And that's you."

"Yes, it is." The glasses had the name Draap on the earpiece. No kid this age could afford those and it was Luc's preferred brand. Proof he hadn't faked the entire thing. His friends would lose substantial bet money with this.

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12 Comments

  1. henhousepublishing
    01/15/2020 at 10:58 am

    Cute interaction between the “big bad wolf” and a child.

  2. #PMInc (@pmnp)
    01/15/2020 at 11:07 am

    Thinking that child-like faith might be saving grace …

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  3. Janet
    01/15/2020 at 3:18 pm

    Those eyes must be something else

  4. Ed Hoornaert
    01/15/2020 at 3:43 pm

    Given his backstory, this is a particularly sweet little moment.

  5. Kayelle Allen Post author
    01/15/2020 at 3:50 pm

    Big bad wolf indeed. 🙂 Thank you!

  6. Kayelle Allen Post author
    01/15/2020 at 3:50 pm

    Dee, thank you for sharing!

  7. Kayelle Allen Post author
    01/15/2020 at 3:54 pm

    Janet, the reveal of his eyes comes much later in the book, but the irony of it is, this story is from Luc’s point of view, and when his true eyes are revealed, he can’t see them, even in the mirror. He’s truly never seen his own eyes. Only those eyes of the few others like him.

  8. Kayelle Allen Post author
    01/15/2020 at 3:55 pm

    Writing Luc with this child — having written him in previous books as the bad wolf, was fun indeed. 🙂

  9. tenajean
    01/15/2020 at 5:31 pm

    Nice moment in your excerpt. I enjoyed it. Good luck and thanks for sharing!

    • Kayelle Allen Post author
      01/16/2020 at 8:44 am

      Thanks for letting me know, Tena. 🙂

  10. okwriter
    01/16/2020 at 12:10 am

    Interesting excerpt. Definitely makes you wonder about the eyes and even the child’s eyes.

    • Kayelle Allen Post author
      01/16/2020 at 8:43 am

      Thank you Beverley! 🙂

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