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Home ยป Play Ball: Oops. Luc should not have done that #Excerpt from A Stolen Heart #SciFi #MFRWhooks

Play Ball: Oops. Luc should not have done that #Excerpt from A Stolen Heart #SciFi #MFRWhooks

  • by Kayelle Allen
  • 04/15/202008/28/2025

Play Ball: Oops. Luc should not have done that #Excerpt from A Stolen Heart #SciFi #MFRWhooks

 

In this scene, Luc has been dealing with business issues and is finally free. He's leaving soon, and hopes to spend a few minutes with Senthys. He doesn't expect to find him in the yard alone with a ball. Why wouldn't the others play ball with him?

Play Ball

Set up: A Deshai is a student in the Thieves' Guild. Luc has trained five and the youngest, Nikko, is about to graduate from the Academy and leave home. Nikko is away taking finals as the scene opens.

Play Ball

Eager to see Senthys, Luc hurried upstairs, but the practice room was empty. A faint sound drew Luc to a tall pair of windows overlooking the back.

Like other houses in the neighborhood, a wooded and fenced yard allowed room for sports and exercise. The house had its own gym but no pool. The boys swam in the jointly-shared neighborhood pool a block over, or at the Academy.

In a sunny area, four of the guys had formed two teams and were hitting a ball over a high net. The Thieves' Guild considered hand-contact sports good for developing muscle, but also dangerous. To avoid injury, while the ball was physically soft, the Tyran technology inside made it react as if it were harder. It turned blue when a point was scored and red when lost. Yellow indicated out of bounds.

Nikko was not down there, which meant he must be taking finals. So where was Senthys?

Luc changed to the other window.

A rigid pole with a lead clipped to its top had a ball attached at the end. When activated, the ball could be hit by one player, and it would react as if being struck back by another. Two could play against one another, or vie with the tech, trying to score more hits. Depending on the setting, it could dodge above their heads or swoop lower.

Though too short to hit the ball properly, Senthys could reach it, and he hit it hard enough for it to wrap around the pole and come back. More of a push, but it spun around the pole, far too high for him to touch. He jumped toward the moving ball.

Why weren't the others involving him? If they wouldn't, he would. Luc threaded his way down the stairs, out through the kitchen and into the backyard.

As Luc arrived, Nikko opened a gate in the fence and walked through, drawing everyone's attention. When he pumped both fists in the air, Luc and the others cheered.

Senthys did too. The ball came back around, struck him in the forehead and laid him out flat on his back.

Luc raced to the boy and knelt.

The child blinked, a bright spot in the middle of his forehead.

"Are you hurt?" Afraid to move him, Luc touched the boy's foot.

Senthys looked up at all the Deshai, who had gathered around him, then at Luc. He grinned. "Do it again!"

A collective groan of relief from the Deshai mixed with their pained laughter.

Luc sank to the ground.

"Did you see Luc run?" Andel asked.

Brinn laughed. "Yeah, you don't ever want to make him come after you!"

In his haste to reach Senthys, he'd set aside thousands of years of training and reflex and used his powers without a single thought.

The Deshai went back to their game, and Luc held out his hands to the boy. When Senthys came to him, Luc pulled the boy close and hugged him like he would never let go.

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10 thoughts on “Play Ball: Oops. Luc should not have done that #Excerpt from A Stolen Heart #SciFi #MFRWhooks”

  1. janwal 04/15/2020 at 12:11 pm

    Sounds like his heart was indeed stolen

    1. Kayelle Allen 04/15/2020 at 12:34 pm

      You got it, Janet. ๐Ÿ™‚

  2. daryldevore 04/15/2020 at 1:29 pm

    LOL – this brought back a forgotten memory. I got smashed in the forehead in pretty similar circumstances.
    Tweeted.

    1. Kayelle Allen 04/15/2020 at 2:24 pm

      I think anyone who’s played tetherball has a war story. LOL

  3. mckennadeanromance 04/15/2020 at 3:12 pm

    Now I know who’s stolen Luc’s heart! ๐Ÿ˜€

    1. Kayelle Allen 04/15/2020 at 5:10 pm

      So right about that. ๐Ÿ™‚

  4. henhousepublishing 04/16/2020 at 3:45 pm

    Tetherball! My brothers and I played that when we were kids.

    1. Kayelle Allen 04/16/2020 at 4:20 pm

      I got some serious bruises with that game, but I loved it. ๐Ÿ˜€

  5. Carmen Webster Buxton 04/16/2020 at 11:28 pm

    I know why, but Luc always sounds sexy to me.

    1. Kayelle Allen 04/17/2020 at 6:23 am

      I get what you mean. To me, it’s his confidence mirrored by his vulnerability. Luc is so smart, but caring for this little boy puts him far outside his level of experience, and watching him fumble through it and win puts all that into play.

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