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Invading the shower #Excerpt from A Stolen Heart #SciFi #MFRWhooks

Kayelle Allen 05/06/2020 Character Insights 13 Comments

Invading the shower #Excerpt from A Stolen Heart #SciFi #MFRWhooks

Invading the shower #Excerpt from A Stolen Heart #SciFi #MFRWhooks

 

The shower - great place to unwind. And the last place you'd expect an invader.

Invading the Shower

Set up: Luc has had an incredibly long day full of drama and hasn't slept for three long days. He's about to unwind with a glass of wine and a shower.

Inside his room, Luc shut the door, activated locks and set full privacy settings. It took three seconds to choose a bottle of Skovron Blush '37. Light, delicate and sweet. He opened the bottle to let the wine breathe while he set about stripping. Everything but the shoes went into the recycler, although he considered ditching those too. If his house-droids couldn't whisk them clean, he'd let them get rid of the shoes. Not his problem.

Luc chose a wineglass, poured, then carried it into the bathing area. After a sip, he set the glass on a marble countertop and slid open the smoky-gray glass door of the shower.

Pietas stepped into view, fully clothed. "I do not need a shower, thank you."

Luc snatched a towel and whipped it around himself. "My lord--" An explosive sigh burst from him. "What are you doing in my shower?"

"I wanted to see you."

"In the shower?"

With a flirty smile, Pietas leaned one shoulder against the wall. "You must admit, it is a good place to see you."

A headache shoved its way forward. "Not happening, Pietas."

"Spoilsport."

"Again, what are you doing here?"

"I portaled into your room and heard the door open, so I came in here, and--" He lifted his chin. "I am your king. I go where I please."

"I asked you not to portal here, my lord. My Deshai are home."

"Which is why--" With a groan, Pietas clenched his fists. "Only you would expect me to explain myself." He gestured toward Luc. "You explain. Where have you been? Are you showering because you're going out, or..." He trailed a look down Luc's length. "...going to bed?" He ended the question with a smile.

"Bed. Alone. I've dealt with drama for days." Luc picked up the wine and drank it in one gulp. "I need a refill." Without waiting for a response, he marched himself back to his room, retrieved the bottle and poured, then splashed wine into a second glass.

Drinking alcohol had no effect on Sempervians, but the act itself soothed. It offered tradition. Comfort. And when needed, a means of stalling while you decided how much truth you could afford to tell.

He offered the second glass.

His king lifted it, sniffed, sipped. "This is good. From one of your wineries?"

"Yes. One of the Skovron locations." Luc swirled his wine, waiting until Pietas took another sip. "It's your sister's favorite."

Mouth twisting, Pietas set down his glass with a click.

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13 Comments

  1. lisabetsarai
    05/06/2020 at 8:33 am

    This was a great scene. Pietas is so infuriating, though.

  2. Kayelle Allen Post author
    05/06/2020 at 8:37 am

    According to Luc, the man’s picture is next to that word in the dictionary. lol

  3. daryldevore
    05/06/2020 at 12:51 pm

    love the line about deciding how much truth he could afford to tell.
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    • Kayelle Allen Post author
      05/06/2020 at 2:00 pm

      Yeah, I thought fit considering he’s talking to someone who won’t lie but somehow mangles the truth anyway. 😀

  4. henhousepublishing
    05/06/2020 at 2:47 pm

    “[A] means of stalling while you decided how much truth you could afford to tell” is the best part of that excerpt. So telling.

  5. mckennadeanromance
    05/06/2020 at 3:18 pm

    I’ve had days where I desperately needed a glass of wine and a shower… the invasion sounds… interesting! 😉

    • Kayelle Allen Post author
      05/06/2020 at 3:50 pm

      Yeah, me too. When Luc’s heading for his room his inner dialogue is that he wants a shower and wine, not necessarily in that order. lol

  6. Janet
    05/06/2020 at 3:19 pm

    I enjoyed this bit especially Pietas dropping by.

    • Kayelle Allen Post author
      05/06/2020 at 3:51 pm

      Pietas always shakes things up. 🙂

  7. Ed Hoornaert
    05/07/2020 at 1:33 am

    It sounds like PIetas isn’t please about this being his sister’s favourite wine.

    • Kayelle Allen Post author
      05/07/2020 at 6:35 am

      long story there. I’d say Pietas is her favorite “whine” 🙂

  8. Augustine Sam
    05/07/2020 at 1:33 pm

    Imagine having a surprise like Luc’s while trying to unwind with a glass of wine and a shower after a long day full of drama. Imagine that surprise coming from someone you probably fancy but haven’t admitted it yet to yourself, or imagine it coming from someone you despise. Endless possibilities… beautifully set up excerpt, and lets admit it, a little tempting too. Well done.

    • Kayelle Allen Post author
      05/07/2020 at 1:47 pm

      A true compliment. Thank you so much!

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