When Luc is asked to locate a child, he knows he's missing something.Β After all, this is the master of misdirection he's talking to: Pietas. Find a kid. Right...
Just find a kid? That's it?
In this scene, Luc is getting instructions from Pietas, the king.
Meanwhile, the king has brought out his panther and is petting the animal. It's far from tame, and although Luc is quite familiar with it, he's not crazy about being this close.
But then Pietas drops a bombshell.
A Stolen Heart
"Locate the girl." Pietas stroked the panther. "Once you tell me where she is, you'll be free. I don't need you to rescue her. Just inform me."
"I see." Luc did not. "Find this ten year-old missing girl. Tell you where she is. That's it."
"Yes. Then after your Deshai graduates, you can move to Tarth and start that building you've been planning."
"Hmm." This was far too easy. Obviously, he'd missed something. Mentally, Luc walked back through the last bits of conversation. "To clarify, you don't want me to bring her to you. You want me to find her and tell you where she is."
"Asked and answered." Pietas studied him. "Why is this so hard for you? Find her. Tell me. Not difficult. But it is urgent."
"What's so important about her?"
Pietas kissed the panther on the nose. "It's not her so much as her parents. If we find her and then take her to them, we'll have more influence."
Now they were getting somewhere. "And who are they?"
"My sister told you about the FTA, didn't she?"
"FTA." Acronyms filled his world, but this one? New to him. Why did that earlier dread raise its ugly head again? He'd probably be better off not knowing, but Pietas seemed to be waiting for an answer. "Not a word. What is it?"
"She didn't?" Pietas frowned. "Oh, I thought... Never mind." He tugged on the panther's ears. "The FTA is the Forgotten Technologies Arena."
"Forgotten by whom?"
"The ancients. It's secret tech. Forbidden."
"Forbidden." The headache he'd faced for the last hour spiked through his brain. He rubbed his temples. Why him? Why now? "Pietas..."
"Oh, will you stop worrying?" The man looked over at him. "No one's going to get sucked into a wormhole this time."
Luc forced himself to take a deep breath and let it all the way out. "That's what you said the last time."
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Why do I think this won’t be as easy as it seems
Smart lady, Janet. π LOL
This time!!! No one is going to be sucked into the worm hole this time!!! That’s not a comforting thing to hear. LOL
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LOL true! Thanks, Daryl. I appreciate the share. π
I get the feeling nothing is ever as simple as Pietas lets on. Great snippet.
LOL – you are so right. π
Pietas is giving him access to forbidden technology then tells him not to worry? Yeah, right.
I know, right? LOL thanks, Ed.