Skip to content
Skip to content
Skip to content Menu Close
  • Homeworld 🌎
  • Claim Your Immortality ⌛🧬
    • Immortal Founders ⌛
  • Meet Pietas 👑
  • Trigger Warnings ⛔
  • 💥 RMS
    • Start for Readers
    • Start for Authors
    • Explorer
    • Loyalist
    • Romantic
    • Escapist
    • Immersive
    • Analyzer
    • Researcher
    • Completionist
    • Collector
    • Adventurer
  • Buy from Kayelle
    • Buy Direct – Antonello Brothers
    • Buy Direct – Antonello Brothers: Immortal
    • Buy Direct – Heart of the Immortal King
    • Buy Direct – Tales of the Chosen
    • Buy Direct – Thieves’ Guild Academy
    • Buy Direct – Bringer of Chaos
    • Buy Direct – Colonies of Man
    • Buy Direct – Misbehaving Robots
    • Buy Direct – Guidebooks
  • Books 📚
    • Hear about new releases 😻
    • All Books 📚
    • Coming Soon 🕘
    • Currently Reading Memes 📖
    • 👩🏼‍🤝‍👨🏻 Antonello Brothers Series
      • 👩🏼‍🤝‍👨🏻 At the Mercy of Her Pleasure #1
      • 👩🏼‍🤝‍👨🏻 For Her Only #2
      • 👩🏼‍🤝‍👨🏻 Her Crystal Clear Truth #3
      • 👩🏼‍🤝‍👨🏻 Antonello Brothers Complete
    • 🌈 Antonello Brothers: Immortal Series
      • 🌈 Surrender Love – Antonello Brothers: Immortal #1
      • 🌈 Forever Love – Antonello Brothers: Immortal #2
      • 🌈 Antonello Brothers: Immortal – Complete
    • 🌈 Heart of the Immortal King Series
      • 🌈 Ring of the Dragon #1
    • 🚀 Bringer of Chaos Series
      • 🚀 Lights Out #0
      • 🚀 Origin of Pietas #1
      • 🚀 Forged in Fire #2
      • 🚀 Watch Your Six #3
    • 🌈 Thieves' Guild Academy Series
      • 🌈 A Stolen Heart #1
      • 🌈 A Broken Heart #2
      • 🌈 A Divided Heart #3
      • 🌈 Thieves’ Guild Academy Bundle 1
    • 🌈 Tales of the Chosen Series
      • 🌈 Wulf – Tales of the Chosen #1
      • 🌈 Alitus – Tales of the Chosen #2
      • 🌈 Jawk – Tales of the Chosen #3
      • 🌈 Tales of the Chosen Complete
    • 🐲 Colonies of Man Series
      • 🐲 The Last Vhalgenn #1
      • 🐲 Trailing Kaiwulf #2
      • 🐲 Beneath the Gates Bundle #1
    • 🤖 Misbehaving Robots Series
      • 🤖 Human Perfect #1
    • 📍 Guidebooks Series
    • 📚 Anthologies
      • 📚 2021 Sci-Fi Anthology
      • 📚 2022 Sci-Fi Anthology
      • 📚 The Expanding Universe 4 Sci-Fi Anthology
  • About 🦸🏻
    • About Kayelle 🦸🏻
    • Contact 📧
    • Creative Team🖼
  • Blog ✍🏼
  • Tour the Empire 🪐
    • Tarthian Tour Company
    • Imperial Archives
  • Fan Art🎨
    • Pietas Art 🐉
    • Stories 🐉
    • Color the Characters 🖍
  • Specials 📌
  • ⭐️ Review Team ⭐️

Kayelle Allen Home
Kayelle Allen

Kayelle Allen Home
  • Homeworld 🌎
  • Claim Your Immortality ⌛🧬
    • Immortal Founders ⌛
  • Meet Pietas 👑
  • Trigger Warnings ⛔
  • 💥 RMS
    • Start for Readers
    • Start for Authors
    • Explorer
    • Loyalist
    • Romantic
    • Escapist
    • Immersive
    • Analyzer
    • Researcher
    • Completionist
    • Collector
    • Adventurer
  • Buy from Kayelle
    • Buy Direct – Antonello Brothers
    • Buy Direct – Antonello Brothers: Immortal
    • Buy Direct – Heart of the Immortal King
    • Buy Direct – Tales of the Chosen
    • Buy Direct – Thieves’ Guild Academy
    • Buy Direct – Bringer of Chaos
    • Buy Direct – Colonies of Man
    • Buy Direct – Misbehaving Robots
    • Buy Direct – Guidebooks
  • Books 📚
    • Hear about new releases 😻
    • All Books 📚
    • Coming Soon 🕘
    • Currently Reading Memes 📖
    • 👩🏼‍🤝‍👨🏻 Antonello Brothers Series
      • 👩🏼‍🤝‍👨🏻 At the Mercy of Her Pleasure #1
      • 👩🏼‍🤝‍👨🏻 For Her Only #2
      • 👩🏼‍🤝‍👨🏻 Her Crystal Clear Truth #3
      • 👩🏼‍🤝‍👨🏻 Antonello Brothers Complete
    • 🌈 Antonello Brothers: Immortal Series
      • 🌈 Surrender Love – Antonello Brothers: Immortal #1
      • 🌈 Forever Love – Antonello Brothers: Immortal #2
      • 🌈 Antonello Brothers: Immortal – Complete
    • 🌈 Heart of the Immortal King Series
      • 🌈 Ring of the Dragon #1
    • 🚀 Bringer of Chaos Series
      • 🚀 Lights Out #0
      • 🚀 Origin of Pietas #1
      • 🚀 Forged in Fire #2
      • 🚀 Watch Your Six #3
    • 🌈 Thieves' Guild Academy Series
      • 🌈 A Stolen Heart #1
      • 🌈 A Broken Heart #2
      • 🌈 A Divided Heart #3
      • 🌈 Thieves’ Guild Academy Bundle 1
    • 🌈 Tales of the Chosen Series
      • 🌈 Wulf – Tales of the Chosen #1
      • 🌈 Alitus – Tales of the Chosen #2
      • 🌈 Jawk – Tales of the Chosen #3
      • 🌈 Tales of the Chosen Complete
    • 🐲 Colonies of Man Series
      • 🐲 The Last Vhalgenn #1
      • 🐲 Trailing Kaiwulf #2
      • 🐲 Beneath the Gates Bundle #1
    • 🤖 Misbehaving Robots Series
      • 🤖 Human Perfect #1
    • 📍 Guidebooks Series
    • 📚 Anthologies
      • 📚 2021 Sci-Fi Anthology
      • 📚 2022 Sci-Fi Anthology
      • 📚 The Expanding Universe 4 Sci-Fi Anthology
  • About 🦸🏻
    • About Kayelle 🦸🏻
    • Contact 📧
    • Creative Team🖼
  • Blog ✍🏼
  • Tour the Empire 🪐
    • Tarthian Tour Company
    • Imperial Archives
  • Fan Art🎨
    • Pietas Art 🐉
    • Stories 🐉
    • Color the Characters 🖍
  • Specials 📌
  • ⭐️ Review Team ⭐️

    Home » No way was he doing the ‘hey can I borrow your key’ thing Excerpt from A Broken Heart #SciFi #Excerpt

No way was he doing the ‘hey can I borrow your key’ thing Excerpt from A Broken Heart #SciFi #Excerpt

Kayelle Allen 02/08/2022 Character Insights 4 Comments

A Broken Heart - Thieves' Guild Academy #SciFi #SpaceOpera

In this scene, Senth has just gotten a password protected message from his father and is looking for a private place to hear it. Background - Senth is a professional thief and a student at the Thieves' Guild Academy.

Hacking the Storeroom

Folks in this town never referred to his father by name. You heard the capital letters when they called him the Man or the Harbinger. Luc Saint-Cyr was the daddy crime lord all the baby crime lords wanted to be like when they grew up.

"Ooh, big scary Man." Senth thumbed off the device. "Please let this be a job and not him finding out I hacked Planet Fun."

He crossed the street and entered the Miraj City Bakery Café. No crowd this early, though a group of professors shared drinks at one of the tables in the back. There were no undergraduate classes this week. Cloak distribution had overturned the beehive.

A clean smell of freshly brewed coffee pulled him deeper into the room.

The android on duty rolled up to him. "Welcome. How may I serve you?"

"Like to use your storeroom a minute." He flashed his father's hand sign. "Private business."

"Of course, sir." The droid offered a keycard.

"Oh, please. I've broken into that room so many times, I prolly owe you guys rent."

On the droid's nametag, a bar of yellow lights indicated confusion. "Pardon, sir?"

"It was a joke. Owing rent for--" Senth held up both hands. "Never mind. No key needed."

He followed the maze of corridors to the back. At the door, he pulled out his lockpick and adjusted the settings. When he pointed it at the lock, the device signaled a lockout error and the tiny screen flashed nonsense letters at him.

What in the worlds did probata mean?

He twisted the tip of the pick and floated the stats as a holovid. Probata Corporation. Wasn't that the system his prof in Premium Fingersmithing ranted about? Something about useless upgrades and pointless codes. What did she say about a bypass trick?

"Think, Senth. You sat there listening to the woman fume for two solid wasted hours."

Oh, no he hadn't.

No, that was the day Senth had flaked out of classes and spent a full day at Planet Fun with his mates. He'd recorded it instead. But had he transcribed it to his code book?

Of course not. And didn't that make this encounter so much more fun? He pinched the bridge of his nose, but his father always did that so Senth stopped it at once.

Why was a lock on a coffee shop's storeroom door harder than a security system at the planet's busiest amusement park? What were they storing in there? The Empress's private coffee stash?

Curiosity over the message from his far-from-patient father burned through his mental pockets. Wait. His father. Surely, he'd have the new codes.

Yes, and then he'd want to know why Senth didn't and no way was he explaining to dear old Dad how he hacked into Planet Fun for "a planetful of fun" instead of going to class.

That fortune Dad paid for Senth to attend classes at the guild academy? Yeah, wasted a full day of it to impress a few girls, which was why he was calling needing a bail out.

And no way was he going back to the droid, stand right in front of a table full of Guild professors, and do the Hey can I borrow your key thing.

Riiight.

Thieves' Guild Academy

Thieves' Guild Academy #SciFi #MMRomance #WriteLGBTQ

#SciFi #WriteLGBTQ #MMRomance

A Stolen Heart: When your king is immortal—and your ex—how do you guard your heart?

A Broken Heart: He's invisible, but he can't hide from the truth...

A Divided Heart: In a school filled with hackers and thieves, how do you trust your heart?

Thieves' Guild Academy Bundle 1 Honor above profit. Skill above chance. Family above all. #SciFi #MMRomance #WriteLGBTQ


Download a printable book list or a list of trigger warnings for all books. Claim your immortality by signing up for my newsletter.

Immortal Reviews Rock & Rule • Join the Review Team

Copyright ©2025 Kayelle Allen. All rights reserved.

Imperial Archive Notice

Kayelle Allen participates in the Amazon Services LLC Associates program, an affiliate advertising program which provides the means for sites to earn fees by advertising and linking to Amazon.com. Amazon and the Amazon logo are trademarks of Amazon.com. If you purchase an item listed on the site from Amazon.com, Kayelle will earn a small commission. Other sites might be affiliate links as well. These will not result in higher prices for you. Thank you for your support!

My characters may be found in multiple books within this story universe.

Pietas images courtesy of Nik Nitsvetov Pietas cosplays.

Transmission complete.

The Empire remembers.

Remain. Endure. Return.

Tagged A Broken Heart, Antonello Brothers, Hahlibeth Suixel, Kayelle Allen Characters, Luc Saint-Cyr, Senth Antonello, Wili Suixel

Post navigation

Previous Previous post: Feb is a short month. Make it count with free reads #BookFair #PNR #Fantasy #SciFi #FairyTale
Next Next post: Read Renegade a new #SciFi short story by Céline Glaude @CelineGlaude #WriteLGBTQ

4 Comments

  1. viviana-mackade
    02/09/2022 at 1:37 pm

    “You heard the capital letters when they called him the Man or the Harbinger.” I absolutely love this sentence, how powerful it is. you know everything you have to.

    • Kayelle Allen Post author
      02/09/2022 at 2:48 pm

      Thank you! I’m glad that came across. Luc has so much power… and because of this young man’s influence, is learning how to temper that and use it for good.

  2. Janet
    02/09/2022 at 2:36 pm

    Interesting when one thinks he can do everything and learns not

    • Kayelle Allen Post author
      02/09/2022 at 2:49 pm

      Thank you, Janet. Yeah, Senth is always finding that out. He’s not so much confident as cocky, but he’s growing into the trait. 🙂

Comments are closed.

Claim Your Immortality

Pick up Lights Out, and help rule the Empire!
Lights Out: Bringer of Chaos, futuristic military sci-fi #SciFi #MilSF #SpaceOpera

Meet Kayelle Allen

Kayelle Allen - Science Fiction and Romance author #SciFi #Read #PietasFans

From her comfy, ergonomic office chair Kayelle Allen forges the very fabric of the Tarthian Empire using only the tips of her fingers and her powerful imagination. Check out the books.
Pick up a current booklist.
Contact Kayelle.

Join my Review Team

Read all my books for free

Pietas performs the Ritual of Strength

Pietas performs the Ritual of Strength

I blog on Coffee Thoughts

I blog on Coffee Thoughts

Follow me on BookBub

Follow Kayelle on BookBub

I am an Ethical Author - Are you?

Alliance of Independent Authors

Last Pass Security

I use Last Pass Security
to protect my passwords and ensure all data for this site are encrypted and safe. I recommend it to anyone who wants to log in to sites with one click while keeping their passwords and identity secure.
Click Last Pass to see the full list of features.
-- Kayelle Allen
This content uses referral links. Read our disclosure policy for more info.

Archives

Categories

Copyright © 2026 Kayelle Allen