In Origin of Pietas, exile changes everything #SpaceOpera #MFRWhooks

When power can compel obedience, control is not the same as loyalty.
Control cannot create trust.

For most of his life—pre-exile—Pietas never had to think about the difference.

Born into authority. Raised to command. Surrounded by systems designed to enforce loyalty and maintain order. The structures of empire made power seem permanent.

Until exile stripped them away.

Exile

Far from the institutions that once supported him, Pietas discovers an uncomfortable truth: authority means very little when no one is required to obey.

On this world, power offers no protection.
Survival depends on trust.
And trust becomes dangerous when the only person willing to stand beside you is the enemy.

Lights Out is the prequel to this series, and its concept is “Humor survives.”

Origin of Pietas covers “Survival binds you to the record.” You are not forgotten. You are still here.

The first is about how people cope.

The second is about relationship.

Which is exactly how readers travel deeper into the series.
Discovering the people.
Understanding the relationships.

Read an excerpt from Origin of Pietas, where exile changes everything, control stops working, and brotherhood becomes a choice.

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The infernal, cheerful whistling began again. Pietas tried in vain to escape the sound. Shackled at the ankles, hands bound behind him, he remained flat on his back. There were no comfort choices inside his pod.

No. Not his pod. He would never claim such a place.

The prison pod. The nightmare pod. A casket for the living.

Would that whistling never end?

Whoever guarded him whistled, night and day. He must have lips made of steel. How a human kept that up day after day was beyond him. Or perhaps... Did an Ultra guard him? Had one of his people come to free him?

Pietas opened his mouth to call out but then clamped it shut.

If it were one of his people, he needed to wait for them to act. They would do so when the time was right. For now, he suffered bouts of agony as feeling returned to his hands and then left in repeating cycles. His metabolism healed him, but brought pain. He focused on that, accepted the pain, welcomed it, examined every step of its journey through his body. What one understood, one could bear.

An Ultra does not seek to escape pain. If one inflicts pain, one must bear it. Pain must be borne. Pain is a warrior’s ally.

He hovered in a nightmare-filled, windowless, endless monotony of thirst and hunger.

Punctuated with unending lilts of bouncy, alert, happy, chipper whistling.

At first, he’d welcomed the sound. The rising and falling notes broke the tedium of everlasting darkness. It stopped for brief periods, but began again soon after.

He’d considered calling out and asking them to stop. He had gone so far as to open his mouth. But asking implied weakness. He acknowledged no tool of torture.

Beg mercy from humans? Never.

This was not stasis. Stasis meant cessation of thought. Of emotion. A dreamless kind of sleep. The end of awareness. A not-time.

They’d frozen his people in these pods, but they’d imprisoned him.

Or perhaps his blood ran so hot, no human force could freeze him.

The tune changed.

For the love of all that’s holy, will you shut up!

Blessed silence fell. But then light blared in his face like a blast of horns.

What fresh perdition was this? They’d tortured him with darkness. Now they’d torture him with light?

Pietas tried to force his eyes open, to face the torture, but after so long in darkness, the light stabbed his eyes. He twisted his head to avoid it.

“You’re awake?” The startled voice hovered close, muffled by the pod. “Security! Security! Prisoner Six-Six-Six is out of stasis! I say again, Prisoner Six-Six-Six is out of stasis!”

The alarm in the male voice gave Pietas a measure of pride. Even imprisoned, he engendered fear. They had taken away his name and given him a number that among humans meant a demonic beast.

Let the legend of Pietas, by name or by number, bring fear straight into the heart of man. No... let it bring terror.

The alarmed voice led him to another thought. Had they not known he was awake? No. These vile creatures had readouts of every type. How could one mistake his beating heart and steady breath for anything other than wakefulness and life? They meant to keep him aware and suffering. They knew.

But whoever was guarding him hadn’t. Pietas might hate humans, but he knew the difference between genuine alarm and fake fear. He’d been instigating the real thing for centuries.

Interesting. He could use that.

His eyes adjusted to the light, and he focused on the face hovering over the small window above him.

Was that...Ghost Six?

The light cut off, taking with it the familiar comfort of sight. Pietas bit the inside of his cheek to keep silent.

First Conqueror, War Leader of the Ultras, did not beg.

He did not. He did not.

The long silence felt like days but must have been hours. He’d begun to think he’d imagined the entire thing when a hard clank-thud-thud sounded through the walls of the pod.

The unit jarred and shook, digging the shackles beneath him into his wrists. A deep, percussive set of smaller thumps hit next. The tap of many hammers or the closing of small successive doors. The death rattle of a dragon.

Had the ship arrived on Sempervia? Would this ceaseless nightmare end? He listened, intent on understanding, identifying. When he recognized the sound, it extinguished his one tiny flicker of hope.

The prison-pod that already held him immobile was being wrapped in chains.